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First off, this is a HUGE file. lol. You just couldn't see things as nicely with the %50, so you get around %80, my peeps.

Anyway, I'm kind of on the fence with this one as far as to whether or not I am going to make this a print for Fanime. Generally, I like this image but it seems to be missing something, not sure what.

Lust from Full Metal Alchemist btw. :p

EDIT: Fixed ear and lightened the background a bit.

Tools: Adobe Photoshop 7, Mouse, no preliminary sketch, 7 hours

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:icongarbagepicker:
Amazing. I would buy this, no doubt. She definitely looks good in your style. :heart:

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:iconsethvegeta:
I like this picture. The eye and tat look great. And I know what ya mean. I sat here looking at it, but I just couldn't put my finger on it. Maybe a different background?
:iconjonmkl:
WOW, thats great! i really her character on the show she really shows off the moral and personal issues the humonculi(how you spell that..) had to deal with.

i think it's great. the only thing i noticed was that i thought the palms of her hands were white in the show(i could be wrong though) and her ear may be a bit small.

but yeah, this is really good. go ahead and print it i'm sure it will be loved.

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:iconsetsuna22:
Wow, that was actually a very good critique! I never noticed if her palm were white! I will look into it.

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:iconsetsuna22:
Yeah maybe, not much room for a background though.... Any suggestions?

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"When I was a kid my favorite relative was Uncle Caveman. After school we'd all go play in his cave, and every once in a while he would eat one of us. It wasn't until later that I found out that Uncle Caveman was a bear." -Jack Handey
:iconsethvegeta:
Not too sure on the bg. Maybe a lighter color or a gradient? But I agree with jon, the ear does look a bit small. But then again I haven't got that far into the anime, so maybe it is that small :shrug:
:iconkiriska:
I think the background should not be pink. Maybe a more mellow color? I'm staring at it too much because it's so bright, even though it does bring out her eyes. Maybe a more grey'd pink then? I like it overall - the pose and expression is very nice. :] I also agree that her ear is kind of small, but I'm not sure if it's the style or what.

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:iconsetsuna22:
okay, thanks!

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"When I was a kid my favorite relative was Uncle Caveman. After school we'd all go play in his cave, and every once in a while he would eat one of us. It wasn't until later that I found out that Uncle Caveman was a bear." -Jack Handey
:iconhigekun:
:heart:_:heart: She's as intense and seductive as ever. I can't see anything wrong but I admit, it's lacking only a bit. Maybe if you broaden the canvas horizontally and thincken your lime lines?

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:iconzig-zag-zero:
awesome. beautifully done

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